You wrote:
"I need to do this correctly. I'm writing a list of feedback I'm supposed to give back, but knowing what feedback I owe you have been difficult to discern from your posts."
This is a subtle feature of your personal and scholarly stance. It is very formal, and seems to clutter your thinking and your reading, with a somewhat stultified outlook, as though if you outline it, you might understand it.
Right now I am responding to you.
You don't owe me anything specific except an intelligent reading and reflection upon what you've read.
Your source of reading is twofold: Appel's Einstein stories, and my entries to our Blog.
Since you began to Blog, each of my entries acknowledges and comments on what you blogged about.
Your entries basically focus only on Appel and there is no give and take with my observations of Appel or my responses to your writing.
I'm trying to have a dialogue. You seem to prefer monologue.
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